Dear native speakers, can you help me with this homework? I am not sure if all the sentences in the text are gramatically correct. What would you change in this work? Does it sound good?
People can live in a house or in a flat. I live in a block of flats together with my parents. Our flat is situated on the third floor and it has 5 rooms – bathroom, bedroom, livingroom, kitchen and playroom. Our bathroom is rather small. There is a laver, lavatory, bath and shower. There is also one big mirror and a washing machine. There are many creams, combs and brushes in front of the mirror.
My bedroom is rather big. You can find there 2 beds, one wooden warderobe and two bedside tables with a red lamp on each of them. There are 3 gorgeous horses pictures on the walls. We also have a lovely green rug in our bedroom.
There are two armchairs, one big red sofa and a modern fireplace in the livingroom. You can find there also one big wall unit and a TV set. The rug in the livingroom is brown with red triangles. We have a lovely glassy lustre in our livingroom which all my friends admire.
The kitchen is small but very modern. There are 4 chairs, one wooden table, one old cooker, one microwave owen and a red cupboard.
My playroom is my favourite place in the flat. I share it with my older sister. When I am tired or have a hard day at schol, it´s is the best place to rest up. When you go into my playroom, you will see a table and a computer with a printer on it. I often play pc games or surf internet there. There are also two beds in the corner of the room.
My sister and me often help my mum to tidy up all the rooms in the flat. We vacuum clean and dust a place. If necessary, I also cook lunch and wash up dishes after the dinner.
Thank you very much, you helped me a lot…It´s hard to choose one best answer…. I hope, the voters will decide.
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{ 2 comments… read them below or add one }
That’s very good, I’m impressed. The only grammar error I saw was "My sister and me", which should be "My sister and I".
Other than that, there are only minor style problems, where the phrasing is awkward but correct. I would remove ‘together’ from the second sentence. And when you say "You can find there", I would use just "There are". But that’s just a style point, it’s not right or wrong.
People can live in a house or in a flat. I live in a block of flats together with my parents. Our flat is situated on the third floor and it has 5 rooms – bathroom, bedroom, living room, kitchen and play room. Our bathroom is rather small. There is a laver, lavatory, bath and shower. There is also one big mirror and a washing machine. There are many creams, combs and brushes in front of the mirror.
My bedroom is rather big. There, you will find 2 beds, one wooden wardrobe, and two bedside tables with a red lamp on each of them. There are 3 gorgeous horses pictures on the walls. We also have a lovely green rug in our bedroom.
There are two armchairs, one big red sofa and a modern fireplace in the livingroom. There is also one big wall unit and a TV set. The rug in the living room is brown with red triangles. We have a lovely glassy luster in our living room, that all my friends admire.
The kitchen is small, but very modern. There are 4 chairs: one wooden table, one old cooker, one microwave owen and a red cupboard.
My playroom is my favorite place in the flat. I share it with my older sister. When I am tired, or have a hard day at school, it´s the best place to rest. When you go into my playroom, you will see a table and a computer with a printer on it. I often play computer games or surf internet in that room. There are also two beds in the corner of the room.
My sister and I often help my mom to tidy up all the rooms in the flat. We vacuum, clean and dust a certain place. If necessary, I also cook lunch and wash the dishes after dinner.
There, I corrected (hopefully) all of it. Everyone has their own opinion on how to write, but this is just my personal take. I tried not to switch around too many words, only if it was necessary. Then I fixed the spelling mistakes and grammar.